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شعر زيبا از یك بچه آفریقایی کاندیدای جایزه ادبی 2005

When I born, I Black,
When I grow up, I Black,
When I go in Sun, I Black,
When I scared, I Black,
When I sick, I Black,
And when I die, I still black...
And you White fellow, When you born, you pink,
When you grow up, you White,
When you go in Sun, you Red,
When you cold, you blue,
When you scared, you yellow,
When you sick, you Green,
And when you die, you Gray...
And you call me colored???

28 comments:

Anonymous said...

reyhaneh.r

the color
is not problem. The problem is humanity of human beings.

Anonymous said...

we think it isnt important that what color people have?
all of people are the God's creature and there isnt anybody who is superior than other people in the color of body.

Anonymous said...

hi my dear teacher!
this poem was realy beutifule

Anonymous said...

We think that the color of skin & race & nationality is not as important as the personality.these differences are only for indentify.
Our behavour is the most important thing that show our status.

Anonymous said...

mall of the person have not a special color in thier life.when they see a rich person that they are like this proverb:flies around the sweet and when they see a poor person they show thierselves poor too.

Anonymous said...

We must not mock or tease other persons because of his skin color , what he wears or STH like this. It is not important where you live,what your skin color is , what your job is ,because these are not the main values we are all humans we are as like as each other with no important differents!

Anonymous said...

what can i say about it .all of the thing that i could say this little child say beautifully . he say true completly and i think he be tired of takrangi him self.
but some person like mikle jakson be tired alot of having the same color and do sth that couse they die (becouse because of his chenging he be sick alot and maby die soon maby)

Anonymous said...

it was realy sad but I think the color of your face is not important and just your personality and the way that you live is very important so we should have selfconfidence .beacuse it can give you every thing .

Anonymous said...

the color of our skin is not important. the important thing is the color of our behaviour. and the best way to recognize true color of people is God's qoute: the best of you is the one who gaurdes most.

Anonymous said...

nowadays most of developed countrries pay attention to
their peoples nationality and the color of skin. nothing else
is important for them,but in fact the most importan thing in logical
people mind is pay attention to inside of every body.

Anonymous said...

Hello.My dear teacher
I think this child want to say:
It is not important that you are which color .It is important that we don't change our color every moment .Imam Kasem says:"doesn't have identity, who become other color every moment". (كسي كه هرلحظه به رنگ ديگري در مي آيدهويت ندارد.)

Anonymous said...

In my opinion at all no important when we born what was colour or when we grow up or when we go in sun.
thit is important that What are you doing? Are we do good career? Are we help the other person? if we do good career, we wil lucky.

Anonymous said...

Hello mrs Nikui
A.S.G said : we agree with this little boy and all of us think that we have the same color but its not true
We change color in our aspect of life

Anonymous said...


hi
when i think i know we are double-foced we are egotistie's humans because when we are coloured
said dork-skinred are coloured.

Anonymous said...

My idea is the color is not important and humans don’t attention to this subject and always they should kind with them.

Anonymous said...

Hi
This is true that the children of Africa is black
and of race that think the people it down of the other races but they are always with the better people in world.

Anonymous said...

I think the color of skin is not important and just the personality and the way that people live and honesty is important. And these this thinking is getting old that the black people can't have a good life.

Anonymous said...

we think there is not any different between bkak or white.we do not pay attention to skins colour of persons.we love blak skin. it is a good poem.thank you.............


HAMMAMI & ABRISHAMI MOQADDAM & FEIZI

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Anonymous said...

very good and funny
Marzieh
Mitra
Sima

Anonymous said...

this is very nice poem .we think the color & Blood are not important.we enjoy from this poem.

"because elahe like the children from africa((dadayi)) "

MELIKA MOHAMMADI_ELAHE DADAYI_SOHA KHAMEHCHIAN

Anonymous said...

i did'nt listen like this poem yet i'd like it and this one can change my idea about people of africa
resa shevidi abdolvahabi

NAFISEH & NARGES said...

HI TEACHR
THIS STORY IS VERY NICE AND INTERSTING !!!!!!!?????


NAFISEH&NARGES B

Anonymous said...

hi teacher
this story is beautiful.
i think the color not important

razieh said...

hello teacher!!!!!!!!!1
this poem is a very beutifule and nice!!!!!!

madihe said...

dis stories are very good and at one word is able narration :wronged

elham said...

Hi
good but no wonderful
have a nice time

fatemeh amanatkar said...

the colour skin is not important this is impotant god craty all humans are unifrom. (f.amanatkar)

CLASS 102 said...

NICE...
WE THINK Descent IS NOT IMPORTANT THING!BECAUSE WE AND BLOCK GIRLS ARE GIRL!BLACK OR WHITE!WE HAPPY FROM THAT READ THIS STORY.
ELAHE DADAYI!!!!
MAHBOBEH HAGH PARAST!!!!
ATEFE FANI POOR!!!
FARZANEH PAKRAVAN FAR!!!!